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Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2014 17:24:40 GMT
Loved it! My only suggestion (which may be a personal preference, I'm not really sure) is that when I see the pins there, I think of the crowd chanting "1....2.....3!" IF you think about it, that's the only counting you'll hear in a real match. However, (again, may just be personal preference and it's not a big deal, hence why I didn't tell you on the matches you've written before) fans never say "1/2" so those kind of come out of nowhere on me.  I'm not sure if I'm the only one that thinks of the fans as saying the counting or not though, so I'm not sure if it should be "feedback" or just a "suggestion." |
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Aug 28, 2014 18:29:09 GMT
RVD vs. Goldberg vs. "Stone Cold" Steve Austin vs. Chris Benoit All four men meet in the middle of the ring. Austin starts trash talking a gives Benoit and RVD the bird and Benoit hits a chop to Austin's chest. Benoit goes to punch RVD but RVD catches the punch hits Beniot with a high kick that causes him to back up into a corner. RVD turns and goes to kick Goldberg in the gut but Goldberg catches the leg. He grabs RVD by the throat and drops him with a chokeslam. Austin runs and goes to clothesline Goldberg but Goldberg doesn't budge. Austin runs off the ropes for another clothesline but he gets caught by a superkick by Goldberg which dazes Austin. Benoit comes from behind and hits a german suplex on Austin before going face-to-face with Goldberg. Benoit goes to throw a punch but Goldberg scoop him onto his shoulder. Goldberg goes for a running powerslam but Benoit drops behind him and locks in a full nelson. They take a couple steps forward and Benoit hits a bridging dragon suplex. 1...2. RVD hits a standing moonsault on Benoit to break the pin. RVD gets up and taunts to the crowd but he turns into a punch by Austin. Austin unloads with gut kicks and punches until RVD backs into the corner. Austin continues with kicks to the gut until it causes RVD to fall to a seated position. Austin then proceeds to stomp a mudhole in RVD and finishes off by flipping RVD the bird. Austin walks over to Goldberg and rolls him over. Austin mounts Goldberg and hits several punches to the face. Austin notices Benoit get to his feet. Austin stands up and runs at Benoit and performs a lou thesz press and hits several punches in the face. Austin walks over to RVD and grabs RVD by the legs and pulls him close to the center of the ring. Austin looks into the crowd and locks in a standing figure four leglock. Austin yells insults at RVD, telling him to tap. Goldberg gets up while Austin keeps the hold locked in. Goldberg runs off the ropes and knocks Austin down with a leaping shoulder block. Austin managed to keep the hold on after the impact. Benoit walks over and hits a kneedrop on Austin which gives RVD the chance to escape the hold. RVD gets up by using the ropes and RVD limps towards Austin while Benoit takes Goldberg down with a clothesline. RVD leans down and slaps Austin in the face before performing a discus leg drop. Austin rolls onto the apron and stands up. RVD walks to Austin but Austin grabs RVD by and pulls him down throat first on the top rope which causes RVD to fall back. Austin drops off the apron and pulls RVD out by the legs. Austin picks up RVD and throws him into the steps. Austin gets close to RVD and leans down to pick him up but RVD kicks Austin in the head. RVD gets up and kicks Austin in the leg. He grabs Austin by the head and bangs his head off the barricade. RVD lifts Austin and places him gut first on the barricade. He climbs onto the apron and taunts to the crowd. RVD jumps off the apron and hits a discus leg drop to the head of Austin. RVD rolls Austin in the ring and he reenters himself. He picks up Austin but Austin quickly kicks him in the gut and hits the Stone Cold Stunner. He lays dwn next to RVD and yells in his face. Austin stands up but gets hit with a Spear by Goldberg. While doing the Spear, Goldberg hit his head on the mat and he rolls on his back. Benoit comes out of nowhere with a Diving Headbutt on Goldberg. Benoit crawls and drapes an arm on Goldberg. 1...2...3 WINNER by PINFALL - Chris Benoit Side Note: I came up with the ending and pretty much just threw it in because I've been working on this match for a while and I just ran out of ideas. I liked it. |
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Post by JaX on Aug 28, 2014 18:54:38 GMT
One match for the divas:
Beth Phoenix vs Kharma
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Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2014 19:07:51 GMT
The more I read the Kronik/BOD match, the more I like it. |
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 2, 2014 10:45:48 GMT
Beth Pheonix vs. Kharma - Requested by chickfromwesthigh
Both women circle the ring and enter a collar and elbow tie up. Beth pushes Kharma into the corner. Kharma gets out of the collar and elbow by shoving Beth to the canvas. Beth quickly gets up.
Beth hits a forearm to the face but Kharma answers with a forearm of her own. They trade several more forearms before Beth gains control and knocks Kharma into the corner with more forearms. Beth backs up and runs and hits a clothesline in the corner. She pulls Kharma by the head and performs a snap suplex.
She goes to pick Kharma up but Kharma hits a headbutt to the forehead of Beth. Kharma gets up and hits a scoop slam. She runs off the ropes and hits a devestating leg drop. She gets up and runs off the ropes again and performs a body splash and covers Beth.
1... Kickout by Beth
Kharma lifts Beth up and places her in the corner. Kharma hits several hard punches to the face of Beth. She grabs Beth by the arm and whips her to the opppsite corner. She runs and goes for a body avalanche but Beth hits a back elbow that dazes Kharma.
Beth gets on the second rope and dives off with a clothesline that bring Kharma down and she covers.
1...2. Kharma kicks out
She picks Kharma up and drags her close to the ropes. She lifts her up for a suplex but bounces her off the ropes for assistance and connects. Kharma rolls over and tries to get up but Beth grabs her by the back of the head and slams her face first into the mat. Beth grabs her and slams her face into the mat again.
She rolls her over and pins Kharma.
1...2.. Kharma kicks out
They both get up and trade punches but Kharma hit a spinning backfist out of nowhere that causes Beth to bounce off the ropes. On the rebound Beth hits a forearm to the face which causes Kharma to bounce off the ropes. When she rebound Beth struggles and hits a huge scoop slam.
She walks over to Kharma's legs and locks in a cloverleaf. Kharma struggles and crawls to the ropes. She reaches for the bottom rope but Beth takes a couple steps forward to the center of the ring. Kharma teases tapping but she manages to crawl back to the ropes and grab the bottom rope.
Beth doesn't let go until the count of 4. Beth argues with the ref. She turns around only to be hit by a samoan drop. She picks Beth up and kicks her in the gut. She lifts her up and drops her with the Awesome Bomb. Instead of pinning Beth she gets up and climbs onto the second rope.
Kharma looks into the crowd before hitting the Awesome Splash and stays for the pin.
1...2...3
WINNER by PINFALL - Kharma
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Post by Xman321 on Sept 2, 2014 12:46:59 GMT
Can others make matches as well? Like, I could write a match if I wanted?
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 2, 2014 22:49:02 GMT
If you want to, you can  . |
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 3, 2014 2:11:09 GMT
I have made a small edit to the OP that will probably be helpful to most.
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Post by JaX on Sept 3, 2014 23:29:23 GMT
Beth Pheonix vs. Kharma - Requested by chickfromwesthigh Both women circle the ring and enter a collar and elbow tie up. Beth pushes Kharma into the corner. Kharma gets out of the collar and elbow by shoving Beth to the canvas. Beth quickly gets up. Beth hits a forearm to the face but Kharma answers with a forearm of her own. They trade several more forearms before Beth gains control and knocks Kharma into the corner with more forearms. Beth backs up and runs and hits a clothesline in the corner. She pulls Kharma by the head and performs a snap suplex. She goes to pick Kharma up but Kharma hits a headbutt to the forehead of Beth. Kharma gets up and hits a scoop slam. She runs off the ropes and hits a devestating leg drop. She gets up and runs off the ropes again and performs a body splash and covers Beth. 1... Kickout by Beth Kharma lifts Beth up and places her in the corner. Kharma hits several hard punches to the face of Beth. She grabs Beth by the arm and whips her to the opppsite corner. She runs and goes for a body avalanche but Beth hits a back elbow that dazes Kharma. Beth gets on the second rope and dives off with a clothesline that bring Kharma down and she covers. 1...2. Kharma kicks out She picks Kharma up and drags her close to the ropes. She lifts her up for a suplex but bounces her off the ropes for assistance and connects. Kharma rolls over and tries to get up but Beth grabs her by the back of the head and slams her face first into the mat. Beth grabs her and slams her face into the mat again. She rolls her over and pins Kharma. 1...2.. Kharma kicks out They both get up and trade punches but Kharma hit a spinning backfist out of nowhere that causes Beth to bounce off the ropes. On the rebound Beth hits a forearm to the face which causes Kharma to bounce off the ropes. When she rebound Beth struggles and hits a huge scoop slam. She walks over to Kharma's legs and locks in a cloverleaf. Kharma struggles and crawls to the ropes. She reaches for the bottom rope but Beth takes a couple steps forward to the center of the ring. Kharma teases tapping but she manages to crawl back to the ropes and grab the bottom rope. Beth doesn't let go until the count of 4. Beth argues with the ref. She turns around only to be hit by a samoan drop. She picks Beth up and kicks her in the gut. She lifts her up and drops her with the Awesome Bomb. Instead of pinning Beth she gets up and climbs onto the second rope. Kharma looks into the crowd before hitting the Awesome Splash and stays for the pin. 1...2...3 WINNER by PINFALL - Kharma I enjoyed the match. Thanks, WWEfan! |
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Post by Xman321 on Sept 4, 2014 1:00:14 GMT
Thought of something, I don't know if this was done yet, but How about The Rock VS Shawn Micheals, if it ever happened, it wasn't big enough for anyone to care, so imagine it being a PPV Match, with the two in their Primes.
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 4, 2014 10:48:21 GMT
I can do it but it might take a little while because I still have some promos to do.
EDIT: I should ask, are you making a request or are you writing it yourself? I just want to make sure I didn't misread what you put.
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Post by Xman321 on Sept 4, 2014 12:04:46 GMT
Suggestion.
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 4, 2014 23:17:13 GMT
Okay, like I said it will take a little while.
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 13, 2014 7:58:08 GMT
ethanm1834, I am currently writing CM Punk vs. Chris Benoit. Xman321, I will write The Rock vs. Shawn Michaels after that.
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 14, 2014 17:02:28 GMT
CM Punk vs. Chris Benoit - Requested by ethanm1834They meet in the center and shake hands before circling the ring. They enter a collar & elbow tie-up but Benoit quickly transitons to a waist lock. Beniot hooks both arms as if going for a tiger suplex but Punk throws his head back and hits Benoit in the nose. Benoit lets go of the hold to check his nose but Punk hits him with a spinning back kick to the gut. Punk goes to whip but Benoit reverses into a whip of his own. Benoit sets up for a back body drop but Punk kicks him in the chest. He grabs Benoit and whips him off the ropes and hits an armdrag off the rebound but Benoit quickly gets up. Benoit runs at Punk only to be hit by another armdrag and Punk keeps hold of the arm. Benoit struggles to get to a seated position, causing Punk to switch to a high keylock. Benoit elbows Punk in the side of the head several times to knock him off. Punk holds his ear while Benoit gets up. He waits for Punk to get to his feet and then goes for a belly to back suplex with success. Looks at the crowd before stomping on Punk's head. Punk goes to roll out of the ring but Benoit stomps him and hits several more stomps while he holds onto the top rope. Benoit backs up as Punk uses tue ropes to get up. When he does, Benoit runs and hits a clothesline that knocks Punk out of the ring. Punks slowly uses the announcer's table to get to his feet. Benoit runs off the ropes and dives through the ropes but Punk moves out the way last minute, causing Benoit to go face first in the announcer's table. Punk rolls into the ring and waits for Benoit to get up. Punk runs the ropes and hits a successful suicide dive that causes Benoit to go over the announcer's table. Benoit struggles to his feet and tries crawling over the table but Punk grabs him by the head and pulls him to where only his feet are on the announcer's table. Punk looks into the crowd before hitting a rolling neckbreaker on the outside. Punk grabs Benoit by the head and rolls him into the ring. Punk gets on the apron and calls Benoit to his feet. Benoit gets up and before Punk can go for a springboard, Benoit punches him the face which only dazes him. Benoit grabs Punk by the head and hits it off a turnbuckle. Benoit backs up. Benoit runs at the corner and jumps on the second rope and twists around with a clothesline that knocks Punk onto his back on the apron. Benoit grabs Punk by the legs and pulls him into the ring and covers him. *1...2.. Kickout by Punk* Benoit gets into a seated position and looks into the crowd. Benoit stands up and waits for Punk to get up. Benoit goes for a release dragon suplex but Punk manages to land on his feet while Benoit lands on his back. Punk quickly locks in the Anaconda Vice. Benoit struggles and hits several punches to the face and he manages put Punk in a head scissor. Punk rolls onto his knees and he turns the hold into a jacknife pin. *1...2.. Benoit rises up and turns the pin into a backslide pin* *1...2.. Punk kicked out* They get up at the same time. Benoit runs at Punk and goes for a lariat but Punk ducks and quickly locks in a hammerlock. He puts Benoit's arm over his head and looks into the crowd. Punk hits a devestating short arm clothesline from this position. Punk crawls to the ropes and uses them to get up. He looks at Benoit and he quickly goes onto the apron and climbs to the top rope. He stands up and stares down at Benoit. He raises both arms and points to the sky. He jumps off with a beautiful elbow drop and he turns it into a pin. *1...2.. Benoit just barely kicks out* Punk sits up and puts his face in his hands as he can't believe Benoit kicked out. Punk stands up and backs into the corner as Benoit gets up in the opposite corner. Punks runs and hits the high knee in the corner. Punk turns it into a headlock. Punk runs and goes for a bulldog but Benoit turns it into a bridging german suplex. *1...2.. Punk kicks out at the last second* Punk is out cold. Benoit quickly gets up and climbs onto the top rope. He dives off and hits the diving headbutt but it causes him to hurt himself and he rolls onto his back. The ref starts the 10 count. *1,2,3,4,5,6,7...* Benoit rolls onto his stomach and drapes one arm over Punk for a cover. *1...2...3* WINNER by PINFALL - Chris Benoit |
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 14, 2014 17:03:30 GMT
That is a lot more than I remember writing.
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Sept 14, 2014 17:30:22 GMT
That is a lot more than I remember writing. This is what i feel when i re-read my reviews... |
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 16, 2014 21:04:18 GMT
The Rock vs. Shawn Michaels (W/ After Match Moment) - Requested by Xman321Rock and Michaels walk towards the center of the ring but Rock sticks his hand out and puts it in Michaels face and does the "Bring It" gesture but Michaels slaps his hand away and they meet face-to-face. Rock quickly punches Michaels in the face twice and he backs up and goes for the People's Punch but Michaels hits him with a knife edge chop. Rock backs against the ropes, holding his chest. Michaels walks up to him and hits another knife edge chop. Rock grabs his chest again and walks to the corner. Michaels walks to him again and hits yet another knife edge chop. Rock walks to the center of the ropes. Michaels grabs him by the arm and whips him off the ropes and he sets up for a back body drop but Rock kicks him in the chest. Rock backs into the ropes and bounces off but gets caught by a inverted atomic drop and Michaels whips him off the ropes again. Michaels jumps up for a dropkick but Rock stopped himself in the ropes. Michaels quickly gets up but Rock runs and hits a jumping clothesline that knocks Michaels down. Rock goes to the head of Michaels and repeatedly stomps on Michaels' chest and shoulder. Michaels rolls onto his stomach and gets to his feet but still bent over. Rock runs the ropes and hits a painful looking swing neckbreaker. He covers Michaels. *1.. Quick kickout by Michaels* Rock picks up Michaels and performs a powerful whip into the corner that causes Michaels to roll up the turnbuckles. He rolls back down and lands on his feet. He slowly turns around and Rock quickly hits a overhead belly to belly suplex. Rock looks into the crowd raises his eyebrow. Rock lifts Michaels up and puts him in a side headlock. Michaels elbows Rock in the side and connects with a belly to back suplex and Michaels quickly gets up. Michaels waits for Rock to get up. When he does Michaels runs at Rock but Rock throws Michaels over the top rope but Michaels manages to grab the top rope and keeps himself from falling to the mats outside. Michaels struggles his legs up and goes over the top rope, into the ring and Rock is shocked. Rock connects with right punches and whips Michales into the corner but Michaels reverses into a whip of his own. As soon as Rock hits the corner, he runs out of the corner and hits a thrust lariat that causes Michaels to backflip onto the canvas and both men are down. Both men roll onto their backs and the ref begins the 10 count. *1,2,3,4,5,6,7,...* Both of them perform a kip-up at the exact same time and they starts trading punches and Rock gets the upperhand. Rock whips him off the ropes but Michaels hit a flying forearm smash to the face and he performs a kip-up. Michaels slowly climbs to the top rope. He looks down at Rock before jumping off the top rope to hit a beautiful elbow drop. He covers Rock. *1...2. Kickout by Rock* Michaels can't believe Rock kicked out but he quickly gets up and goes to the corner. He looks at Rock. He raises his leg up and stomps his foot on the canvas, calling Rock to his feet. He stomps 4 more times until Rock gets to his feet. Michaels steps out of the corner and goes for Sweet Chin Music but Rock catches his foot. Rock spins Michaels around and goes for the Rock Bottom but Michaels elbows Rock in the head to get out of it. Michaels steps back and goes for Sweet Chin Music again but Rock catches the foot again and spins Michaels around. Rock kicks Michaels in the gut and hits a DDT and he kips up. Rock picks Michaels up and whips him off the ropes and hits a spinebuster. Rock goes to Michaels head looks into the crowd. He takes off his elbow pad and goes for the People's Elbow but Michaels kips up and hits Rock with Sweet Chin Music and both men fall to the canvas. The ref starts the 10 count. *1,2,3,4,5...* Michaels slowly rolls to his stomach. He starts crawling to Rock and drapes his arm over him. *1...2.. Rock barely kicks out* Rock slowly gets up while Michaels is still on the canvas. He leans against the ropes to catch his breath. Michaels gets up while Rock is gathering himself. Rock notices and walks to him but Michaels goes for Sweet Chin Music again but Rock catches his foot. He spins Michaels around and successfully hits the Rock Bottom and he keeps his arm on Michaels for the pin. *1...2...3* WINNER by PINFALL - The Rock After the match, Rock slowly gets to his feet and puts his on the top turnbuckle in the corner. He looks into the crowd. Michaels gets too his feet and walks up to Rock in the corner and puts his hand on his shoulder. Rock turns around and sees Michaels with his hand out. Rock takes his hand and shakes it. Rock pulls him in and hugs him and says something in his ear. They let go of the hug and Michaels starts walking around and Rock turns toward the crowd and celebrates. Rock turns around and he takes the Sweet Chin Music out of nowhere by Michaels. Michaels looks down at Rock with a blank look on his face. He walks out of the ring and goes through the curtain. |
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Post by Xman321 on Sept 19, 2014 11:47:59 GMT
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Post by WWEfan57 on Sept 19, 2014 13:05:58 GMT
Glad you liked it, . The after match thing was just for shits and giggles, by the way. |
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