ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Jul 25, 2014 16:51:33 GMT
Here you can train your skills to cut a promo. You can make an independent promo (Just cutting one, and waiting for your "points"), or you can make promo wars. It's all up to you. The rules are... well... follow the rules of the forum (There's a thing we'll need written down, Xman321), and rate each other's promos. This thread is made for guys like me, who feel like they need to be better in their character. So if we could try helping each other out with the promos (basically saying what you would've wrote there, for it to be better.), and if all goes planned, everyone can learn here. |
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SRI
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Post by SRI on Jul 25, 2014 16:54:12 GMT
Use your alters everyone!
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ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Jul 25, 2014 17:11:04 GMT
*Lights go out, and the people start to chant "Here's The Hero"*
Seems like it hasn't been long... I've given, to keep myself alive. Throughout time while you had your freedom... believing.... that you could wash it away, wash it away....
It's time!
*Crowd yells "It's Hero Time!", then red lightnings hit the ring posts, flame comes out of the ring posts, then the lights come back, revealing ati in the ring*
You know what i don't get? *Crowd yells "What?"* I don't get why people put assholes on pedestals, when they know that they're going to get backstabbed by them. Oh the blindfolded people...
But you know what i will do with these assholes? *Crowd yells "What"* Beat these assholes' as until the people realize, what they're really worth.
These assholes may think that they're better than me, heck they can even beat me. It'll all end, when the Killer comes for them.
I don't care if you hate me, nor if you love me. I will not leave you in the shadows, just because you don't like me. I'll save everyone.
And get ready, because the saving will come soon.
And when i'll be there, standing with a championship in my hands, you will know that the saving haven't stopped yet. The saving will stop, when i'll be gone. But until then...
IT'S HERO TIME!
*Red lightnings hit the posts, and the power goes out again. A few seconds later it comes back, but ati is nowhere to be found*
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Post by WWEfan57 on Jul 25, 2014 20:36:45 GMT
*Paul James is sitting in the corner of his locker room. He is wearing his hoodie, tank top, and dark blue jeans. The camera zooms in on his face, showing the bags under his eyes.*
*he talks slowly* I haven't had a good night sleep in days... I don't even know what day it is. The room keeps spinning but I don't feel dizzy. I don't feel sick, I don't feel sad... *he sighs* I don't feel anything.
*He stands up using a chair for balance. He groans while getting up.*
*He slaps himself in the face* I need help! *he knocks the chair over* I've tried the sleeping pills, I've tried drinking cold medicine... but I still can't sleep!
*He suddenly rotates his shoulders and cringes. He puts two fingers on his temple. He starts talking in almost a completely different voice.*
Paul... Paul, you need to chill, man *he laughs*. How 'bout you take a break and I'll take over from now on? *he looks at the camera* Oh, hi... I'm one of the many friends of Paul. It may be the same body... but everything else is different.
No one can save Pauly... no one.
*He cringes and rotates his shoulders again. He starts talking normal again.*
Help me!
*The camera fades to black.*
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ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Jul 25, 2014 20:41:54 GMT
*Paul James is sitting in the corner of his locker room. He is wearing his hoodie, tank top, and dark blue jeans. The camera zooms in on his face, showing the bags under his eyes.**he talks slowly* I haven't had a good night sleep in days... I don't even know what day it is. The room keeps spinning but I don't feel dizzy. I don't feel sick, I don't feel sad... *he sighs* I don't feel anything. *He stands up using a chair for balance. He groans while getting up.**He slaps himself in the face* I need help! *he knocks the chair over* I've tried the sleeping pills, I've tried drinking cold medicine... but I still can't sleep! *He suddenly rotates his shoulders and cringes. He puts two fingers on his temple. He starts talking in almost a completely different voice.*Paul... Paul, you need to chill, man *he laughs*. How 'bout you take a break and I'll take over from now on? *he looks at the camera* Oh, hi... I'm one of the many friends of Paul. It may be the same body... but everything else is different. No one can save Pauly... no one. *He cringes and rotates his shoulders again. He starts talking normal again.*Help me! *The camera fades to black.* Wow, good crazy promo. Who am i kidding? Great crazy promo. |
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Post by WWEfan57 on Jul 25, 2014 20:54:06 GMT
*Paul James is sitting in the corner of his locker room. He is wearing his hoodie, tank top, and dark blue jeans. The camera zooms in on his face, showing the bags under his eyes.**he talks slowly* I haven't had a good night sleep in days... I don't even know what day it is. The room keeps spinning but I don't feel dizzy. I don't feel sick, I don't feel sad... *he sighs* I don't feel anything. *He stands up using a chair for balance. He groans while getting up.**He slaps himself in the face* I need help! *he knocks the chair over* I've tried the sleeping pills, I've tried drinking cold medicine... but I still can't sleep! *He suddenly rotates his shoulders and cringes. He puts two fingers on his temple. He starts talking in almost a completely different voice.*Paul... Paul, you need to chill, man *he laughs*. How 'bout you take a break and I'll take over from now on? *he looks at the camera* Oh, hi... I'm one of the many friends of Paul. It may be the same body... but everything else is different. No one can save Pauly... no one. *He cringes and rotates his shoulders again. He starts talking normal again.*Help me! *The camera fades to black.* Wow, good crazy promo. Who am i kidding? Great crazy promo. Thanks, ati. Is it bad that I play a crazy person well, lol? |
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ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Jul 25, 2014 20:57:20 GMT
Wow, good crazy promo. Who am i kidding? Great crazy promo. Thanks, ati. Is it bad that I play a crazy person well, lol? I don't really know. If you read any of my game reviews, i play one too. And i think i play it good... so... don't ask me. (I'd like to know if people think i pay a good crazy person in my reviews.) |
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Post by WWEfan57 on Jul 25, 2014 20:57:29 GMT
*Lights go out, and the people start to chant "Here's The Hero"* Seems like it hasn't been long... I've given, to keep myself alive. Throughout time while you had your freedom... believing.... that you could wash it away, wash it away....It's time!
*Crowd yells "It's Hero Time!", then red lightnings hit the ring posts, flame comes out of the ring posts, then the lights come back, revealing ati in the ring*You know what i don't get? *Crowd yells "What?"* I don't get why people put assholes on pedestals, when they know that they're going to get backstabbed by them. Oh the blindfolded people...
But you know what i will do with these assholes? *Crowd yells "What"* Beat these assholes' as until the people realize, what they're really worth. These assholes may think that they're better than me, heck they can even beat me. It'll all end, when the Killer comes for them.I don't care if you hate me, nor if you love me. I will not leave you in the shadows, just because you don't like me. I'll save everyone.And get ready, because the saving will come soon.And when i'll be there, standing with a championship in my hands, you will know that the saving haven't stopped yet. The saving will stop, when i'll be gone. But until then...IT'S HERO TIME!*Red lightnings hit the posts, and the power goes out again. A few seconds later it comes back, but ati is nowhere to be found*I like this promo. Great job, ati. |
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ati "The Hero"
Owen Hart
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Jul 25, 2014 20:58:08 GMT
*Lights go out, and the people start to chant "Here's The Hero"* Seems like it hasn't been long... I've given, to keep myself alive. Throughout time while you had your freedom... believing.... that you could wash it away, wash it away....It's time!
*Crowd yells "It's Hero Time!", then red lightnings hit the ring posts, flame comes out of the ring posts, then the lights come back, revealing ati in the ring*You know what i don't get? *Crowd yells "What?"* I don't get why people put assholes on pedestals, when they know that they're going to get backstabbed by them. Oh the blindfolded people...
But you know what i will do with these assholes? *Crowd yells "What"* Beat these assholes' as until the people realize, what they're really worth. These assholes may think that they're better than me, heck they can even beat me. It'll all end, when the Killer comes for them.I don't care if you hate me, nor if you love me. I will not leave you in the shadows, just because you don't like me. I'll save everyone.And get ready, because the saving will come soon.And when i'll be there, standing with a championship in my hands, you will know that the saving haven't stopped yet. The saving will stop, when i'll be gone. But until then...IT'S HERO TIME!*Red lightnings hit the posts, and the power goes out again. A few seconds later it comes back, but ati is nowhere to be found*I like this promo. Great job, ati. Thanks. |
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Post by WWEfan57 on Jul 25, 2014 20:59:34 GMT
Thanks, ati. Is it bad that I play a crazy person well, lol? I don't really know. If you read any of my game reviews, i play one too. And i think i play it good... so... don't ask me. (I'd like to know if people think i pay a good crazy person in my reviews.) The only one I've read so far is for SvR 11(?). I'll check the others, though. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 25, 2014 22:02:45 GMT
I will save you all from the evil that is ati.....don't fear....your Whiplash is here.
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ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Jul 25, 2014 22:08:44 GMT
I will save you all from the evil that is ati.....don't fear....your Whiplash is here. |
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Post by Xman321 on Jul 25, 2014 22:41:32 GMT
Whoa, wait one sec, why are we talking about "Saving" Others, if anyone is gonna be a "Savior", it's me.
I'm not called Savior for nothing, And if any one has a problem, I have no problem sending them to Level 5.
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Post by iodill8 on Jul 25, 2014 22:46:02 GMT
Interviewer: Today, I am here with RWF wrestler, Topher Pillson. What are your plans in RWF, Mr. Pillson?
Topher Pillson: To put it simply, I'm going to prove why I, your NOT blonde, blue-eyed All-American, is called "The Kid Legend" and I'm gonna strike like my name, "Lightning". Everybody better be careful, because you never know when and where lightning is going to strike.
Interviewer: Thank you, Mr. Pillson.
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ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Jul 26, 2014 1:49:35 GMT
Interviewer:
I am here, to interview ati "the Hero", if he'd show up here.
Red lightning hits right next to the interviewer, the power goes out then comes back again, and ati is standing next to to the interviewer.
ati:
So? What do you want?
Oh, yes. So, Mr.Hero, what are your plans to win the RWF championship?
First of all, just call me ati. Second of all, i don't need plans. I'll go out there, and show the crowd what i'm made from.
But don't you think that having no plans, will make you lose this tournament?
Not at all. That's why i don't have plans. I do what i want. If i want to do a Hurricanrana, i'll go for a Hurricanrana. You can't predict me.
And what makes you better than your opponents?
My cause. I'm not here for the gold. I'm here to save people, from the blinding ignorance.
We only have time for one last question. So, please answer what has been on everyone's mind:
Why are you saying, and i quote "But this will all end when the Killer comes"? What does that even mean?
Have you ever seen my finisher?
Yes
Do you know it's name?
Killer DDT?
So? What do i need to answer? You already know the answer.
But...
Before the interviewer could even start his sentence, another red lightning strikes, then the power goes out, and back again, but ati is nowhere to be found.
The hell? Anyways, this was all the time we had this time. Se you again, next time.
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Post by WWEfan57 on Jul 26, 2014 4:38:27 GMT
Interviewer: Ladies & Gentlemen, we've been interviewing several RWF wreslters and we now move onto one of our more... interesting guests. Please welome the self-proclaimed "Cincinnati Psycho", Paul James
*Paul James slowly walks into frame wearing a hoodie, tank top, and dark blue jeans. He sits down.*
Interviwer: Welcome, Mr. James. It's nice that you agreed to come on here.
*Paul James blankly stares at the interviewer with his emotionless eyes. A close-up shows the bags under his eyes.
Interviewer: *coughs* Anyway, let's move on. So Mr. James, what brings you to RWF? Is there anything you wish to achieve?
*Paul James leans forward in his chair.*
Paul James: I'm here because you have guys in other companies playing a character... acting like their crazy when they don't have a damn clue what crazy really is. I define crazy... I am crazy.
*He rubs his face with both hands.*
I'm not going to tell you what I want to achieve. If I tell you... people will know what to expect and I live on being unpredictable. You don't get far telling people what you're gonna do.
Interviewer: Okay... *coughs* onto the next question. Is there anyone in RWF that you would consider a friend, or someone you wouldn't mind teaming with at some point in your career?
Paul James: Right now, frends are the last thing I need. To answer your second question... there is one person I would be able to team with... the one guy I believe that is as crazy as me. "Delusional" Danny Davis would be the perfect teamate for myself... but that wouldn't make us friends... just co-workers.
Interviewer: *nods* Onto the next and final question. What you say would be the main cause of your mental state?
*Paul James quickly stands up.*
Paul James: What did you just ask? Are you asking for my backstory? That's none of you damn business!
Interviewer: I... I didn't know it was a sensitive subject.
Paul James: Don't try to feed me that bull*bleep*! You knew exactly what you were asking!
*He walks closer to the interviewer.*
You should know not to ask a stupid ass question like that!
*He grabs the interviewer by the collar.*
Interviewer: Se... Security!
Paul James: What are they gonna do, huh? Do you really think those Mall Cops can do anything to help?
*The security runs and grabs Paul James by the arms and drag him away.*
Paul James: Get off of me, you useless pieces of *bleep*!
Interviewer: Get that psychopath out of here and put him in a straight jacket!
Paul James: You think that can save your ass, mother*bleep*!? You're dead wrong!
Interviewer: Cut the cameras! I'm done doing interviews here, I quit! |
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ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Aug 6, 2014 21:21:15 GMT
Thoughts? Also, can you find the easter egg(s) in this promo?
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Post by CaptainDamage on Aug 8, 2014 6:38:18 GMT
and I heard, as it were the noise of thunder, one of the four beasts saying, Come and see. And I saw, and behold a white horse.
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ati "The Hero"
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Post by ati "The Hero" on Aug 19, 2014 17:40:16 GMT
Thoughts?
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Post by SRI on Aug 21, 2014 10:11:37 GMT
*ati makes his entrance, then gets a microphone*
ati: Hey. Nice to see you. Blah-blah-blahblah. You know what? *Crowd yells "WHAT?"*I'm here to save you, but i changed the style of saving. I WILL not save you, until YOU don't change your lifestyles. I live in a straight edge lifestyle. I don't smoke, i don't do drugs, and i don't drink alcoholic drinks. I'm still here to save you, but not until you do the same. Trust me, being straight edge helps a lot. You don't die faster, because of lung cancer. Your heart doesn't stop because you had your dose. And you don't go do 'that' with the world's fattest chick. I live a straight edge lifestyle, and i am a Straight Edge Hero. *One half of the crowd boos ati, while the other half cheers him, as he exits to the back* Ha, ati"The Hero". The only person that needs to be saved is, you! You are the only one calling yourself a hero, which makes me think you are ... DELUSIONAL! The only thing that needs to be changed, is the way your face will look when you face me. Maybe we should face soon, but then again, you aren't worth my time; because I am busy being the RWF Hardcore Champion. Yeah, you are busy too. You are busy being a nobody! You may call yourself a Straight Edge Hero, but I can't call you a hero with a straight face. |
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